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Do not fear the unknown with me.  I can tell you're one of discriminating taste.  I'm not like the others and I can see the same holds true for you!  You are drawn by what is hidden in the light, what may be revealed in the shadows.  Oh don't fear me; yes my eye has seen much but my lips have never met you.  Yes, my arms have held many (I will not insult you by denying it), but oh how they ache for you and you alone.

Do come closer, surely you want to know that what you see is not just a trick of light and shadow, a flicker of glamour to fade with the sun.  Oh the secrets I can share with you, the things I can awaken while you sleep.  But perhaps sleep is not what you seek, perhaps you yearn for deep conversation - a meeting of minds.  Come, meet with mine for I wish to know yours.

Do let me just brush your skin with my fingertips.  I can tell you know how to dance this glorious dance of two bodies and souls.  I know much but oh I know there is much I can learn from you.  Let's not fool ourselves: neither of us are sweet and innocent, shrinking and demure - we know what we want and we know how to get it, but why take only the straight and narrow path to what delights us so.  Is not the thrill of the hunt in the searching for that which we seek and not so much in the finding?

Oh do allow my lips to introduce themselves to yours.  Can you not see how they soften and quiver with just the thought of such an acquaintance?  You need not fear coming upon anything you do not desire; is not all that you desire clothed here in the shadows, glistening there in the light?  Ah, but you do know how to weave an enticing spell upon the unsuspecting, for in all that I have seen - for all that I have held - never has a one made my heart flutter so or my breath quicken as you.

Do warm yourself within my arms for I see a chill upon your skin; or is it the tremble of anticipation?  Ah but why rush when can breathe together, our hearts finding each other's rhythm?  Can you not detect the fragrance of my hair?  Rose and jasmine intertwined in glorious union.  A union I can see you wish for within your eyes.  And what do my eyes reveal to you?  Look deeply within them and tell me the color of my desire.

Do you not yearn to find all my shadowed places?  Do you not wish to gaze upon the peaks and valleys of my smooth and gently quaking landscape?  Where your eyes explore, so let your touch follow.  Up and down the rolling hills; let me delight in your discoveries.  The longer you search the higher the fire rises within me.  Can you not feel the heat?

Do kiss me with all your passion.  How can we hold back a moment longer?  I hunger for every inch of you.  Feed me your love; fill me with your desire.  Show me how I can satiate your need as we drift through this night together within this space – safe within the shadows.  You and I will find all there is to seek as two lonely bodies join as one in sweet, joyous bliss.
This was a writing exercise I was invited to participate in. Four people wrote a story based on the same image prompt ("Shadows by Sharyn Yee" - As Sharyn Yee is the wife of the originator of this little project, the image *is* used with permission) ;)

Please go check out and read the three other submissions:
nc-narrations.blogspot.com/201…
underlochandkey.amybethinverne…
www.kickstarter-conversations.…

Our guidelines were as follows:
Genre? Any.
Words? Let's say under 1k. Going a tiny bit over is permissible.
Rating? Also any.

This piece comes in at 587 words, so it nearly half of the max word count - which I think is a no-no for these types of exercises (I think you're supposed to get close to the max word count) - but this is as long as the story wanted to be. I like the notion of a woman seducing a man in a way that makes him think he's the one doing the seduction!
I will admit that erotica is not my default genre, but it's fun to write occasionally ;)
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Raven-NC Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
I agree with AmyBeth - that was smoking!  I love the flow of the words, building the images.  Well done!
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KiusLady Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :)
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USNessie Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Woah... that smoked, in a GOOD way! Smoldering. Loved it!
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KiusLady Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx much!! :)
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belladzines Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Another fantastic read!!!! who knew my image could invoke such different stories from 4 different people? ..
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KiusLady Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked!
Thx for faving!
Yes it's amazing the very different stories we all created :)
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gozerthecarpathian Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Applauds*  Well done.  I love seeing how all of us at least hint of seduction even if not fully spelling it out.  :) 

Also TOTALLY different settings in each and different reasons.  Well done one and all! :) 
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KiusLady Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So glad you liked!
Thx for the watch :)
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